I like primarily a lot of things about this poem.
1. The title captures both the sadness and the joy of crunching leaves.
2. I like how you captured two different sides of leaf crunching; a lot of leaves get stomped on, unnoticed; contrast is good.
3. Free verse! way to go. :)
keep writing. that’s the best way to get good at it.
Woah. That’s good bro.
Well thanks!
I like it! Very good. And deep.
I’m going to go step on a crunchy leaf now.
I like primarily a lot of things about this poem.
1. The title captures both the sadness and the joy of crunching leaves.
2. I like how you captured two different sides of leaf crunching; a lot of leaves get stomped on, unnoticed; contrast is good.
3. Free verse! way to go. :)
keep writing. that’s the best way to get good at it.